ACT 1--THE WORLD UNWATCHED - 40 PAGES
1. Leona is socially invisible in High School
1.5 The Oswegos in High School
2. Celia's presentation
3. How they get cast (ABC boy --> Father)
5. Family dinner, Mom admits to pre-interview
6. Guole arrives at the house--announces what's going to need to change (In car, art department) and thinks about buying the house crumbling into the sea
7. Alan/Margaret see Guole pacing outside
8. Leona opts to go literally invisible
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0. THE HOUSE neighborhood history
3. The neighborhood reaction to the vans
2. Leslie Bennett's sweeping remodel
4. The first episode filming: Jareth meets cameraman
5. Sets up trailer in Alan's drive
5.5 Leona's hideout in crumbling house--finds stoner circle
6. End on Leona and Alan--something about how people see eachother
ACT 2: FAME, and PENANCE for greed- 60 PAGES
**"Recasting"**
1. The editors as fates
2. Celia as star
3. Jareth's new high school sex life
3.5 THE MONEY
4. Leona and Alan = Love of the unwatched
6. Margaret watching through glass
7. Bennett in his trailer, watching the dailies--Last Tycoon repetitions
**"Penance"**
3. House falling into the ocean
4. Celia cheating with the exterior shots crumbling cameraman
5. The cousin shows up on the stoop
5.5 Going to church--as a family
6. Swimming in Sunday Best
7. Pool party--Leona is given the opposite of what she wanted, Alan cannot love her
8. Crumbling house crumbling
ACT 3: THE HORRIBLY HEART-RENDING HEALING OF A WOUNDED FAMILY - 50 pages
1. Dad's roadtrip to fat-camp
2. Jareth driving
3. Steal the magazines from 7-11
4. The Madonna Inn's banana cream pie
simultaneously
1. Leona and Celia = Bernice and Marjorie
2. Mom and Cousin = Thelma and Louise
--All of them, Lynchian neighborhood scare, absurdism of Sunset Boulevard's Dead Monkey, some other plot point draws them down.
MARGARET
ALAN
LEONA
BENNETT? GUOLE?
SOMETHING NEEDS TO HAPPEN BETWEEN A SHOW VISIONARY AND A SHOW ACTOR...
Thursday, April 17, 2008
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